Peer reviewed Mikaela Sheil. See original post here: https://mikaelaswords.home.blog/2018/09/09/the-flow-of-my-mind/
Hi Mikaela, great work on your creative paragraph, titled ‘The Flow of My Mind’. It is written beautifully and with great detail. The language of your work captured my attention, especially when you use the repetition of “click-clack”. It highlights the sounds of what is happening at that specific time. I can somewhat relate myself to your creative piece, for example, everyone has different thoughts and they always flow into the mind. Keep up the good work!
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